Utopia
This is Dedicated to Ard, Anna and The Man Who thought he Knew Too Much…
~Utopia~
From out of the Wreckage of a World Gone Wrong….
The Man Stumbled Forth
His Eyes Closed Tightly…
He Felt the Heat of the Torn and Worn Sky
Pressed Heavily Against His Once Thoughtful Brow
The Protective Blue Light of his Endless Soul…
Baring The Brunt of this Dystopia
As he Approached the Dark Rickety House on the Hill…
…He Knew He’d Never Return
And His Deep Black Boots Stomped all the Harder In The Knowing
AWAKEN!! The Voice Spoke, as His Eye’s Opened…
...Their Bright White Lights Gleamed Forth
And The Door Did Open Before Him
As He Entered The Empty Shell of a Home…
…His Now Future
He Thought He Heard The Last Robin Sing…
But Hope Was Not Enough… Not Now
The Door Quickly Shut Behind Him
As He Both Bowed and Kneeled
Suddenly the Greatest Thoughts And Pains of all
Shot Briskly Through His Minds Eye…
…And Enveloped Him
The House… Oh Indeed It Shook
And The World Too Around Him
He Stood Suddenly And Spoke The Words…
His Eyes Oh So Clear Blue Now
No More War… No More Pain
No Cruelty… No Distain…
His Words Like Smoke Seethed Outward
Until They Came, and Rose All Too Quickly
Filling The Home.. Conjuring The Light
And when he Finally Halted…
…The Walls Around Him Were No More
And All That Remained…
Were Green Fields… And Skies… And Waters… And Love… And Life
Utopia
“I Only Wish I Could Have Stayed for a While…”
Were His Last Words…
And He Was Gone…
And All Was Good
Inspired By Ard’s #1 Song On His Top 10 Songs Ludovico Einaudi – “Divenire”
Anna’s Something Wrong with Heart
And The Ramblings of a Man That Thought He Knew Too Much
Crafted by – DarkJade~
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September 20, 2011 at 10:23 am
That was like an orgasm for my eyes
September 20, 2011 at 10:30 am
lol, your Music really hit me last night, I appreciate it
DarkJade-
September 20, 2011 at 10:48 am
I’m very honoured to have had something dedicated to me
This is also my first ever pingback, so thank you DarkJade!
September 20, 2011 at 11:12 am
You are very welcome Anna, like Ard’s List of Music, your Piece also Got to me Yesterday, and Inspiration does not come cheaply… So In that regard, as well the enjoyment, I appreciate your Efforts
DarkJade-
September 20, 2011 at 3:00 pm
This is Fantastic! I loved the anger which seethed with a force of will. and so is that song which Pete posted. Thank you Pete! For introducing me to a kick-but composer.
@Jade weve got to get you more readers, man! Im starting to feel like a stalker. LoL
September 20, 2011 at 3:25 pm
Thanks Mid, isn’t he a Great Composer? I think I may have heard that song before, but like I told Pete on his Post, I intend to do more Research in regards to his music.
I’m Glad you liked the Post. Aye, it cost him his life didn’t it. But it was worth it to him.
Yah know, I get a lot more Views than I do Comments, not sure why, but oh well, I do not feel stalked, your insights, as well as Anna’s, have served me well. And when others do Comment, I truly love it. But I also Appreciate all the Views I’m getting, it’s very Motivating and Inspiring.
DarkJade-
September 20, 2011 at 3:30 pm
Hah well I’m definitely a reader of Jade’s, he’s an amazing composer, I can recommend songs you need to listen to as well. He certainly keeps me sane.
September 20, 2011 at 3:33 pm
Now Pete I feel Stalked By… j/k
January 2, 2012 at 10:42 am
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