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Chess With Agatha (Chapter XXV) – Behold The Golem

Posted in Chess With Agatha, Entertainment, Fantasy, Fiction, Novel, Writing with tags on June 12, 2012 by darkjade68

Chess With Agatha…

And The Dark Fortress of Doom

A Novel by DarkJade

CHAPTER XXV – Behold The Golem

THE KINGDOM OF NORAWYN

KING ETERR’S CASTLE

THE ROYAL COURTYARD

Morr jumps tree to tree as the Female Warrior Golem follows right behind…

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!

Taking great sweeping swings at him with it’s spear, but not quite hitting him.

Meanwhile, The Second Statue begins to awaken as well…

Morr takes note “Oh, great.”

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!

Soon the second one comes for him as well, and he finds himself atop a great tree, surrounded by the two Golems.

Suddenly The Great Grey and Silver form of The Dragon Tu Masa flies by and picks up the Woman Warrior Golem, carries it through the air, and drops it into the Great Courtyard Pool…

SPLASH!!!

This gets the attention of the Male Golem, and he takes a swing at Tu Masa as she flies by, but misses…

SWOOOSH!!

“NEED A RIDE… VAMPIRE??!!” calls Tu Masa as she sweeps in near Morr, and he leaps upon her back…

THE NORTHERN TOWER

King Eterr approaches The Blue Wizard Hemmingbyrd, who eyes his Staff, as he lays against the wall near the stairs, still recovering from being slammed against it (See Chapter XXIII)…

“Oh no you don’t…” speaks King Eterr.

Hemmingbyrd than reaches inside his layers of blue robes, and pulls out a Crooked Stick Wand…

“ALTOMAY!!” he yells, as a sparking almost pink light comes out of the wand, but as it is about to strike King Eterr, his Glittery Red Ring seems to Absorb the Magic…

Leaving the Ring Pulsating in Red Light…

“Squablot” speaks the frustrated Hemmingbyrd, it not being a Spell Chant, but rather one of his made up words.

King Eterr holds up the hand with the Red Ring on it, and taps it with a finger from his other hand…

“Handy don’t you think…”

King Eterr than steps over and picks up his Great Sword from the ground.

“Any more tricks up your sleeves Wizard…” he says more than asks.

“Just one…” with this, Hemmingbryd pulls forth Moskk’s Dragon Summoning Horn, and Blows it…

VROOMMMPPPPPP!!!!!” the horn blows…

RARRRRRRRNNNNGGGG!!!” and the unearthly sound of Moskk growling comes from outside the tower window.

King Eterr, surprised, runs over to look out the window, where he sees The Great Black Dragon Moskk… Upon his back, Eterr’s Sorcerous Queen Olamna, still bound and gagged…

“Moskk…” Eterr speaks under his breath in utter surprise.

And that’s when Hemmingbyrd makes his move, quickly leaping over to his staff, which catches Eterr’s attention immediately…

“Lets get some light in here shall we…” speaks Hemmingbyrd, he then thunks his Staff against the floor…

CRACKOOOMMM!!

“MILONAYY!!!” the Wizard speaks, and suddenly a great storm cloud appears above the Tower, and Giant Bolts of Lightning strike the top of the Tower, blasting the roof off of it…

BRACKKKKK!!!!!

King Eterr tries to take cover, placing his Helmet on quickly, and Hemmingbyrd throws up his blue bubble of blue light, protecting him from the Rock Shrapnel…

With this Moskk suddenly appears above the now roofless tower, and looks down upon Hemmingbyrd and The Crouching King Eterr…

“CHECK!!” speaks Moskk in a growlish tone…

DarkJade-

PICTURE CREDIT – Athena The Greek Goddess Of Wisdom

Prologue

Chapter One – The Protector

Chapter Two – Another Life

Chapter 2.5 - Hemmingbyrd’s Dream

Chapter Three – Check

Chapter Four – Hunting for Unicorns

Chapter Five – The Coming of Agatha

Chapter 5.5  – A Fool’s Heart

Chapter Six – Table Manners

Chapter Seven – Elias

Chapter Eight – West Bound

Chapter Nine – Red And Blue Forest

Chapter X – Yokade Labyrinth

Chapter XI – Vanishing Sky

Chapter XII – The Curse

Chapter XIII – The Minotaur Orft

Chapter XIV – Queen Sorceress Olamna

Chapter XV – The Final Piece

Chapter XVI – Agatha Rising

Chapter XVII – The Dragon Truth

Chapter XVIII – The Grey Dragon Tu Masa

Chapter XIX - The Stand In King

Chapter XX – The Game

Chapter XXI - Infiltrate

Chapter XXII – Into The Belly of The Beast

Chapter XXIII - Blood Games

Chapter XXIV – Stone Cold

Chapter XXVI - Iliad

Chapter XXVII – Trials

Chapter XXVIII – Shadow Wizards

Chapter XXIX – Diligence

Chapter XXX – Checkmate

Chapter XXXI - Farewells – The Conclusion

 

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Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk

Posted in Comic Book, Comic Script, Entertainment, Heroes, Story, Superhero, Writing with tags , , , on June 12, 2012 by darkjade68

Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk

An Interesting Thought/Feeling came over me just the other day… “I wish I was the Comic Script Writer For The Hulk…”.

Now keep in mind, I’ve never really been a Hulk Follower… No, in fact back in the Late 80′s, and Early 90′s, it was indeed “The Flash”, “Captain America”, “The Avengers”, “West Coast Avengers” and “Iron Man” that were my Comics of Choice.

And as a Very Young Child, “The Flash” and “Captain America” were Major Heroes for me, and I really enjoyed their Older Comic Books from the 60′s and 70′s.

Than why Write The Hulk? I’m not quite sure… I can tell you that in the midst of all of My Projects, some part of me Hungers for One Solid Project where I can Create on a Regular Basis, and Make a Living at it… While at the same time doing My Personal Additional Work on My Free Time.

But still, why the Hulk?

I will say this, I haven’t even seen the New Avengers Movie yet… Even though I very much look forward to it, and am a Huge Fan of “Robert Downey Jr.”, especially his Portrayal of Toni Stark, who I very much am familiar with from My 80′s/90′s days of Reading “Iron Man”, and “West Coast Avengers” (At that point he was in the West Coast Avengers, in fact I think he Lead them?).

And I never saw the Ed Norton Version of the Hulk, though I would like to see that as well, as I’m also a Huge “Ed Norton” Fan…

 

 

 

 

And though many Hulk Fans, and Critics alike, did not Care for Ang Lee’s Version of “The Hulk”… I actually felt that there were several parts about it that were Quite Brilliant…

 

Admittedly, Nick Nolte’s Performance/Portrayal as Bruce Banners’s Father, Basically Stole the Show…

But The “Hulk” Desert Scenes, were about as “Hulk” as it gets…

 

Leaping Hulk;

Beating Up On Tanks (The Desert Stuff Starts at the 2:20 Point);

But still, why the Sudden Want to Write The Hulk?

Perhaps because I feel it would be an “Extremely Challenging” Character to Write for… Lots of “Emotional” and “Psychological” Aspects to Delve into…

After all, you can’t spend the Whole Thing Writing about how He Smashed Ten Cars and Knocked down a Building… Right?

Thanks for Reading/Listening/Watching

In the next little bit I may Give a Go at Writing a Comic Script for The Hulk, and Post it on here just to see what you guys think… We shall see, I’ve got so much other stuff going on right now.

DarkJade-

PICTURE CREDIT – 3D Artists

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