I’ve been trained to hate the use of the word “love” in a poem, and usually it makes me cringe, but I do believe you’ve pulled it off. “Love’s Blood” has a real nice sound to it (I think it’s that vowel rhyme) and it might be my favorite part of the poem. It also helps that you use it after “wolf” and “fox” instead of after anything that seems to directly be about romance. Good work!
July 30, 2012 at 11:34 pm
“black hair, blue eyed, fox”: music to my ears!
July 30, 2012 at 11:37 pm
Nice
Thanks for your Comment Rob
DarkJade-
July 31, 2012 at 6:10 am
LOVE the last lines.
July 31, 2012 at 7:01 am
Thank you El Guapo
DJ-
August 2, 2012 at 3:33 pm
I’ve been trained to hate the use of the word “love” in a poem, and usually it makes me cringe, but I do believe you’ve pulled it off. “Love’s Blood” has a real nice sound to it (I think it’s that vowel rhyme) and it might be my favorite part of the poem. It also helps that you use it after “wolf” and “fox” instead of after anything that seems to directly be about romance. Good work!
August 2, 2012 at 5:56 pm
Thank you LadyGrave
DarkJade-
August 3, 2012 at 1:57 pm
Invokes so much, stirring the imagination to deep depths, love it
August 3, 2012 at 2:39 pm
Thank you Claire
DarkJade-
August 6, 2012 at 6:44 am
Lovely!
August 6, 2012 at 8:50 am
Thank you Madhu
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