Passion
~Passion~
Hearts Beating
Breath Catching
Lights Dim
Warm Breaths
Hair Dark… Soft… Light
Hands Crossed
Hands Clutching
Movement… Slow
Pull… In…
Fair Skinned
Eyes Light
Eyes Darken
To Know Love
To Be Loved
Planes Shifting
Planes Shifted
Hold Tightly
Breath In
Mornings Light
Shaking
Shaken
Trust
Quiet…
Sleep…
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September 23, 2011 at 5:35 pm
This is excellent as always. Your poems have a 3 dimensional quality to them which I find very pleasing to the inner eye. if that makes any sense? This one and the others too, like painting vivid pictures with a sparse amount of words as the paint.
September 23, 2011 at 5:50 pm
I do know what you mean, I actually aim for the Inner Eye… Stimulating the Reader just enough to send them on their way with their own Imaginations. The Images we ourselves come up with our potentially the most enjoyable. The stimulating itself is more of my Artistry I think. And like I say, I’m very much a Visual Artist, I just use Words instead of Paints, because I have not the ability to draw or paint, lol
Thanks Min
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