Tremor
Listen to this while Reading…
The man stands, arms crossed
His Black Trench Coat Flapping in the Knowing Wind…
His Eyes on the Distant Horizon
Beyond the Blood Black Sea
His eyes Reflectant of the Blue Flares that Fall from the sky…
He raises his hands slowly, palms to the Sky
The Fragile Walls of all that is real
And established as True…
Tremor, you ask why
His Skin begins to Water, and Fade to Light
But he must Press On
The Stars start to Quake, and lose form
His Tears roll back, and inward
Shall his selfishness Prevale
He starts to scream
White Birds Rise
He turns Kneels and cries
The Wings upon his back do Take Shape
His Eyes open White
Is he too late
His Blood begins to Tremor
Silent is the night
DarkJade-
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October 18, 2011 at 1:17 am
These will always be your best written works. Poetry with added ambiance included. Always keeps me coming back to this blog. The imagry this one evokes, kinda reminds me of the cinematography in the movie Casshern.
October 18, 2011 at 9:01 am
Thank you Mid. I’ve never heard of, or seen Casshern, I just watched a couple scenes on YouTube. Pretty interesting. Part of my overall fascination Creatively is Definitely with the Japanese, as is Reflected in my one and only complete Screenplay, White Jade, which takes place in Future Japan. There Passion and Beauty is never ending for me. They are truly a beautiful people. Perhaps part of it is I am very Internal, as Japanese often seem to be, and also very Passionate, also as at least their Artists seem to be. But also Aesthetically, I think they are beautiful as well. I remember even as a child I wanted Black Hair, and have always loved the way their hair looks. Also, right next to Blue as my favorite color, is Black. Beyond that it’s just an innate attraction I’ve always had to their culture.
Being that my True Passion is Film Making, perhaps that comes across in my Poems. I am a Visual Artist, with out the ability to paint. But with Film I am able to bring to life my visions with the aid of many, which I don’t mind anyway, as I love working with, and creating with other people. I’m glad that the Poems/Visions keep coming, as I wasn’t sure that they would, as the only time I’ve Written Songs, which is the closest thing to Poems that I’ve ever Written, has been Falling in Love, or Falling out of Love… As it stirs me deeply in both cases, with all I suppose, and the Words just seem to flow. But I’ve always had Visions, that have often become Film Concepts. With Poems, I’m capturing Visual Moments as opposed to full on Film Concepts, and doing my best to translate them into words, so that I can show them to people.
I am glad that some of it appears to be coming through to Readers/Writers such as yourself.
Thank you again for your Compliments, and Comments
P.S. did you see your Comments Inspired the last Captain Fire 197, lol
You got the Crew in Trouble, lol
DarkJade-
October 19, 2011 at 4:21 am
yeah, I tend to do that. lol But there is always hope, when competent leadership comes into play. lol
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