Heat

Heat

A Heat’s Come over me…

A Dryness… In the Air

My Breath deepens

My Steps… Slow

I try to look around…

Cast My Gaze towards the sea…

But there is none

I Close My Eyes and Search out the Source…

The Cool water…

Of My Translucent “Minds” eye

I Find the Deep Blue…

Take it Deeply in

I am Free

I Find My Wings…

I Smile Slightly…

And Leave This Place

DarkJade-

PICTURE CREDIT –  Yellow Fire

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8 Responses to “Heat”

  1. This I like very much! Beautiful metaphors too!
    And I’m now listening to the music, pretty good too, but your poem in itself is perfect : ) … ah okay I get why the song now I can feel the heat 😉

    • Lol

      I don’t have to Use Music with My Poems, but I sometimes like to Send People Off after I’ve Taken them Somewhere, yah know… Extend the Delving Inward

      I’m Glad you Like it, I think I thought of you when I was Writing it, but wasn’t sure how Often you make your way to This Site

      Thanks for the Comment H

      DarkJade-

      • Oh I get the idea, nice concept indeed!
        Well it surely resonates with me, thanks!

        • Oh I figured you got it, We get the Impact of Music that’s for sure, Lol… But sometimes I wonder if I should do Music with Certain Pieces… Generally it’s an Instinct thing

          And you’re Welcome

          DJ-

          • Lol, actually, no, I didn’t. I meant “oh! okay, i get why you do it now” 😉 In this case the music brings a new dimension, that’s cool, plus I bookmarked the song and found others this way!

            • Ha, that’s funny, Totally Misunderstood you, that’s the Problem with Text, you don’t get “Voice Tone”, Lol

              Oh, nice about the other songs

              DJ-

  2. Yes, that is the problem with text, but with the right punctuation mostly it helps. That being said, I am not good at punctuation LOL

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