“She Could Feel His Breath Warmly Against Her Neck… She Gasped… He Took Her Hand… Her Lips Parted, But She Hardly Breathed…

“How Can You Read That #@#%!” Seth says, which Pulls Daisy Arram right back into Reality…



Seth Quarum, a 17 Year Old Young Man, with Spiky Blond Hair, and a White Denim Jacket, to match his White Levi Jeans… Is laid out in the back of an Old Navy Blue 1970 Mustang, reading a Video Game Magazine… With his IPod Turned Way Up…

Meanwhile Daisy Arram, though she prefers to go by Just Arram… Who is Just 16, Sits in the Drivers Seat, her Bright Blue Hair up in a Ponytail, as she Reads Away at her “Vampires Lust” Romance Novel… Chompen on about 6 Pieces of Pink Bubble Gum, and also Listening to an IPod, but only in her left ear… Leaving her right ear open in the direction of the Dark House on the Corner to the right… Lit with only one light.

“Huh??” she says looking back at Seth… “Did you say something?”

Seth then pulls one of the ear pieces out of one of his ears “Huh? Did you say something?”

She sits there staring at him mid Chew “Oh never mind” and goes back to reading, chewing, and listening to Avril Lavigne.

Seth then turns off his music an leans against the back of Arram’s seat “There’s no way in hell he’s going to show up here… Not tonight… Not after that…”

Arram looks at him.

“Massacre…” he finishes.

Suddenly Arram freezes looking off behind Seth “Don’t… Turn… Around” she says as quietly as possible.

A Cool Air brushes over both of them…

Seth Gulps, and begins to sweat slightly.

In the distance a screen door can be heard opening, followed by a large door… Both are then closed, but not completely…

“Ok” she says, and Seth looks back at the house… The front door is barely left open.

He then looks back at Arram “Did he–” he starts to say, but she cuts him off.

“Yes…” Arram replies as she jumps out of her car, and goes to the trunk… She takes her Key chain out of her Pocket, which is a Rubber Blue Bunny, that has only a singular key on it.

Seth follows closely behind “Arram… This is nuts…” he insists.

She opens the trunk, and inside, underneath a black velvet cloth, which she removes… Is an Immaculate Crossbow… With 6 Silver Arrows in a Quiver near by.

“No… What’s nuts is that he’s just going to continue to get away with killing hundreds of young girls” she straps the Quiver on her back, takes out the Crossbow, and shuts the trunk.

She’s Wearing a Knee Length Black Skirt over Blue Jeans… And a Long Sleeve Dark Blue Thermal Shirt… With a Black Turtle Neck underneath it.

And Pink Converse High Top Shoes.

She marches right towards the house, with Seth on her heals “Please Arram… Lets just call the Police”

When she reaches the Door, which is open maybe an inch, she comes to an abrupt stop.

“You have to do this Arram… If yo don’t… No one will” she thinks to herself.

“Alright…” she says under her breath, cocks the Crossbow back with a Silver Arrow, and enters the house…


PICTURE CREDIT – Vampire Knight

Part Two – No Invitation Needed

Part Three – Uncle Tom

Part Four – The Night Will Come

Part Five – Tall… Light… And Armed

Part Six – Cold Night

Part Seven – Guests With No Breath

Part Eight – Wolf, Man… Vampire

Part Nine – The Escape

Part Ten – Too Late

Part Eleven – The Wounded

Part Twelve – The Hunt


4 Responses to “Allure”

  1. Cool….a detective mystery read…me likes 🙂

    • Thanks Vee, Lol

      There’s Likely to be a bit of “Blood” sucking in it as well, Lol

      Yes, I know Everyone’s Doing, or has done Vampires… But truth be known, I’ve always Like Vampires, and the Story just came to me… So we’ll see how it goes.

      Thanks for you Comment


  2. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words Says:

    so much for going to bed…LOLs
    I will not be able to sleep till I catch up!
    you are a gifted writer DarkJade….

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