Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk (Volume II)

Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk (Volume II)

Back on June 12, 2012, I Wrote an Article Called “Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk“… Check it out if you haven’t, I’ll Wait Right Here For Yah, Lol

Basically it was an Article about how I thought it would be ‘kinda cool’/’challenging’ to be The Comic Script Writer for The Hulk… 1) Because I’ve never been a Huge Hulk Fan, though I think he is a Very Cool Character 2) Though I’ve not seen the Avengers Movie, and I Very Much Look forward to seeing How They Did with Hulk This Time, I’ve Never Been All that Thrilled with any interpretation of him. Though, like I say, he does look like he’s going to be good in “The Avengers.”

Now I Don’t Have all that much Experience Writing Comic Book Script… In fact, the only time that I have was back in 2006, when I Converted the First Pages of My Screenplay “White Jade” into 8 Pages of Comic Script.

I Actually Found the Whole Process to be Very Cool.

 

 

 

 

I’m Going to Go Ahead And Show You The Three Stages/Forms of one of my Comic Book Pages. Starting with the Small Segment of Screenplay, Followed by The Converted Comic Script, and Lastly the Drawn Page Itself, which was Drawn by an Artist that I Hired.

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THE SCREENPLAY SEGMENT: (INT. = Interior Shot EXT. = Exterior Shot)

 

EXT. OVERHEAD SHOT OF NEW TOKYO – NIGHT

    

TITLE – White Jade

                                              

TITLE – One Hour Earlier

 

INT. NEW TOKYO POLICE DEPARTMENT’S SECRET QUESTIONING FACILITY – HALLWAY – NIGHT

 

DETECTIVE BEN WAYNE, a six-foot plus, fairly rugged looking Caucasian, in his mid to late thirties, walks with the head of the facility.

 

                             DETECTIVE BEN WAYNE

Okay… What do we got…

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THE CONVERTED COMIC SCRIPT:

 

WHITE JADE, ISSUE#1 James Mahoney      2                                                                                                                              

 

PAGE TWO (three panels)                                   

 

Panel 1. A night shot over New Tokyo.

 

CAP/TITLE:

WHITE JADE

 

CAP:

NEW TOKYO, JAPAN – YEAR 2032

 

Panel 2. The nearby hills, where there is a building built into the hillside.

 

CAP:

NEW TOKYO POLICE DEPARTMENT’S SECRET QUESTIONING FACILITY

 

A.K.A. THE RED LIGHT ROOM

 

Panel 3. A Facility Hallway one hour earlier. Detective Ben Wayne, a six-foot plus, fairly rugged looking Caucasian, in his mid to late thirties, wearing a trench coat, walks with the Facility Head. The Facility Head is Japanese, and is carrying a Physical Case File with him.

 

CAP:

ONE HOUR EARLIER

 

DETECTIVE BEN WAYNE:

Okay… What do we got…

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THE FINISHED PAGE:

Though I May Seem Like I Know What I’m Doing, That’s only because I Studied How to do it at the time… If I ever start Writing Comic Book Script Again, I shall need to Work on the Craft Quite a Bit, Lol

Ok, enough of all that, In This Next Segment, I’m going to Attempt to Write a Bit of “Hulk” Story… Perhaps Next Time I will Convert it into Comic Script.

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The Hulk

by DarkJade

Chapter I – Freefall

Inside a large underground facility, a man sits alone in the dark.

His arms are chained by the strongest metal in existence… Atamatium.

Not that this would make a difference.

This man, a renowned physicist, has now been reduced to an outcast… An outlaw… A mistake.

This man is Bruce Banner.

Suddenly a door opens some hundred or so feet from Bruce, and hundreds of bright lights come to life.

Bruce wearily covers his eyes, as he’s been in darkness for days.

No Food… No Water.

“How yah doin there Doc” speaks the voice of a rather large looking man, whose head is shaved, and has three golden teeth in his rather unappealing, and crooked smile.

Bruce does not reply, nor does he look up at the man.

“The quiet treatment, eh” speaks the man.

The man, who was carrying a small black case, sets it down, and opens it.

Inside is some sort of injection device, with a bright glowing blue liquid in it.

“This may hurt a bit Doc, but it least it will keep ‘big, strong, green and ugly’ under control.

The man injects the side of Bruce Banner’s right shoulder with the liquid.

“Arghh” Bruce Banner lets out.

The man then walks away, and comes back over with a bowl of some sort of slop, and a canister of water.

“Here yah go Doc” with this he plops the bowl on the floor next to Bruce, causing some of the slop in the bowl to splash over.

CLUNK

Bruce does not move, and continues simply to keep his head towards the ground… Eyes closed.

He also tosses the canister on the floor next to Bruce.

CLINK

“Nice talken to yah Doc… See you in 3 days” the man says as he gets up to leave…. But just as he does

“Are they still talking about going to Mars?” Bruce suddenly says.

The man turns to look at Bruce who is now looking right at the man.

“Yeah… I guess” the man replies, feeling a bit uneasy, as if he just wants to leave.

“Is Dr. McClusky on the staff?” inquires Bruce.

This seems to bother the man, and so he walks over to Bruce Banner and stands above him.

“Now do I look like the sorta guy who would know something like that Doc?” the man  says.

Bruce looks up at him “I…” he starts to say, but the man kicks Bruce across the face with his big black boot.

“UHGGG!!” is the sound Bruce makes as he’s knocked over, his face smacking the cold concrete.

The man then opens up the water, and pours it over Bruce “It’s probably better that you don’t talk Doc… You only piss old Bruno off”

He then pours the bowl of slop on top of Bruce as well, drops the bowl on him, and exits the room.

As the lights go out, and all is dark…

All that can be seen are two glowing green eyes…

“You really shouldn’t have done that” speaks Bruce in an altered, almost growling voice.

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Thanks for Reading/Listening

DarkJade-

PICTURE CREDITS – Smash, Hulk

All Rights To The Hulk Belong to Marvel Comics

 

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2 Responses to “Comic Script Writing – If I Wrote The Hulk (Volume II)”

  1. Nice treatment.
    Hulk in The Avengers was one of the best parts of the movie – both as Banner, and towards the end, as Hulk.

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