Wrote this 10 years ago today, back when I was doing ‘Blog Series’… ‘The Written Word’ was created as a place for me to write, like a writing journal, nothing within it is edited, just a free consciousness of stories etc… ‘Captain Fire 197’ was one of my first Blog Series, really need to go back and read it some time
Jenna sits inside the Druggy Abandoned Building, bodies of Drugies, or Henchmen of The Drug Lord Colonel Otquai‘s Number One Man, “Rain”, either dead, or knocked unconscious…
Outside The Toodlock Thire Police are still holding their position, and not entering the building.
Nisho suddenly appears, and approaches Jenna…
Jenna senses Nisho.
“Get back Nisho! I can’t seem to control this…” Jenna says with her head hung low, never looking up at Nisho.
“Sure you can” Nisho confidently replies.
“NO!! NISHO!! GET OUT!!! I DON’T WANT TO HURT YOU, BUT I WILL!!!” Jenna suddenly floats into the air, and gazes at Nisho as she yells.
Her eyes full of Rage.
Nisho steps even closer, she’s maybe 15 feet from Jenna now.
“You couldn’t always control your Telepathy right? This is no different Jenna…” Nisho pleas.
Growing up in the 70’s-80’s, Disneyland was truly ‘the happiest place on earth’
The Pirates of the Caribbean ride was my favorite, but I also enjoyed the Haunted Mansion, and Space Mountain
But more than that, the whole feeling at night
And the Disney Movies, ‘Sleeping Beauty’ was my favorite and when ‘Aladdin’ came out, I’d never in my life laughed harder in a movie theater that one of the Genie scenes
Robin Williams was a genius, I will always love him
Then Disney picked up ‘Pixar’, which was brilliant
Their animation department was flailing, so it made perfect sense to pick up the future of animation…
Pixar
Next came Marvel, we’ve all seen how that has turned out
And last, but not least, ‘Lucas Films’…
Once again, brilliant
Most importantly with ‘Lucas Films’ is, the original first two ‘Star Wars’ films/George Lucas were the reasons I became a Filmmaker…
…so this was a big deal for me
And the reality is, George Lucas isn’t going to live forever, so I thought Disney was a perfect place/home for the ‘Star Wars’ Franchise
The difference between me and a lot of people who loved the first and second installment of the ‘Star Wars’ films (Chapters 1-6), is I never called myself a ‘fan’
I’ve always been a filmmaker first
I simply felt ‘Star Wars’…
…and ‘The Empire Strikes Back’ were brilliant (They’re my two favorite films of all time)
I wasn’t much of a fan of ‘Return of the Jedi’, I wasn’t an Ewok fan, but all of the Luke and Darth Vader scenes still felt like ‘Star Wars’ to me
The films in 1989, 92 & 95 were their own thing
I felt Lucas got slammed pretty hard for ‘Phantom Menace’, which likely lead to ‘Attack of the Clones’ being so great, as well as ‘Revenge of the Sith’
But unlike a ‘fan’, I had no expectations going into those films, so I truly enjoyed them for what they were
Chapters 7, 8 & 9 (Also ‘Rogue One’, and ‘Solo’) were also their own thing
‘The Force Awakens’ surprised me…
…although J. J. Abrams, did not
He’s great… he’s a force
I was so happy with ‘The Force Awakens’, even though SPOILER ALERT Han Solo died
Rey was a great two dimensional character (Focused on what was in front of her)/Never stopped running/Typical ‘Star Wars’ character in a good way
Poe was awesome, but I’ve always loved Oscar Isaac
He’s brilliant
But to my surprise, Finn was my favorite character in ‘The Force Awakens’
I didn’t really care for ‘Ben Solo’ in ‘The Force Awakens’, which was a big deal because ‘Darth Vader’ is my favorite villain of all times
But in Chapter 8, ‘The Last Jedi’, Ben (Adam Driver) is brilliant
And Rai was awesome… Their characters made that film
Mark Hamill (Luke) was also a welcome ‘Star Wars’ contribution to the general vibe of the film
Plus his final scene was brilliant
‘Rogue One’ was literally the best possible prequal to ‘Star Wars’ Chapter IV
Brilliant, a stand alone film for sure
Some say it’s their favorite all time ‘Star Wars’ film
I don’t blame them
But Chapter IV & V are my favorites, followed by Chapter II
When I was a kid, Han Solo & Darth Vader were my favorite characters in the original ‘Star Wars’…
…and ‘The Empire Strikes Back’ was Han Solo’s/Harrison Ford’s ‘swan song’ (It was his best ‘Star Wars’ film)…
These characters and films changed my life
With ‘Solo’ (The film), once again, I entered with no expectations
And in the end, I liked it
But more than that, a sequel should have really been made… This film was truly built for it, and it would have likely been an even better film
Also, Lando was great
SPOILER ALERT I wasn’t thrilled to find out Darth Maul was alive (The dude was cut in half in ‘The Phantom Menace’), but I guess they brought him back before this film in another project
That I’d call a mistake/attempt to bring back what ended up being a fan favorite from ‘The Phantom Menace’
But ‘Star Wars’/George Lucas made his own mistakes/’what I considered a lackluster decision’ by killing Boba Fett in that pit in ‘Return of the Jedi’…
SPOILERS But Disney brought Boba Fett back to life too in ‘Mandalorian’, also a bad move in my opinion… But also based on his popularity I think
And now he’s going to have his own series… Ehh not so thrilled
Finally, the final ‘Star Wars’ film, Chapter IX (The Rise of Skywalker), no expectations once more (The world on the other hands had huge expectations), they destroyed the Finn character sadly, having him run around after Rey the whole film, but the chemistry of Rey and Ben Solo was awesome (Once more)
All and all, I was happy with that film (I’m not sure many were, but I was
The reality is, there was no way to meet the expectations of the whole of the ‘Star Wars’ audience (Perhaps if my bro and I filmed it, lol), which is already largely broken into at least to parts anyways (The die hard fans of the original films, and the fans of the second group of films, not to mention the new fans from all over)
Lets move on/back to Disney
First with the creation of Disney+, which is awesome…
…Disney old movies, Marvel Movies, Pixar Movies and ‘Star Wars’ movies and series all in one place
I was in
Also, making it just $6.95 made it a no brainer
And if that wasn’t enough, galvanized with the creation of ‘The Mandalorian’, which in my opinion truly gave me hope that the original ‘Star Wars’ feeling from the original ‘Star Wars’ films, was alive and well, and more than that, had a future
Thanks largely to Jon Favreau, Dave Filoni and Pedro Pascal
Each, indispensable
SPOILERS I’m not going to even tell you what happens at the end of Season 2 if you haven’t seen the show… If you’re ‘Star Wars’ fan, just check out both seasons
This post was going to be even longer (I wrote much more), but I feel it’s long enough as it is
I will end with this
To the Disney Execs;
I really hope that what you do isn’t all, or even 80% about making money, and that’s it… Try to keep the spirit of Walt Disney himself in your ranks
Steer clear of all of this ‘cancel culture’… Stop giving so much power to the trolls/haters out there, and that goes for all major corporations
Tweet happy birthday to George Lucas from now on, once again, if the trolls steered you away from it, you’ve given them too much power… Respect the creator of ‘Star Wars’, or sell Lucas Film
Yes, Disney+ out performed your expectations, even before the pandemic, but don’t expect that growth rate to continue, it’s not natural/possible… Appreciate and maintain the followers you already have, sorry corporate america, it’s not all about growth, it’s also about maintenance
You’re making great shows, don’t let greed cloud your vision, nor destroy everything positive that you’re achieving
Break the mold over and over again, don’t stick to things that extinguish the souls of your employees, and leave your fans hanging dry
David Prowse Was The Body Language, And Presence Of Darth Vader, My Favorite Villain Of All Time… One Of The Several Layers Of This Masterful Character… I Was Distracted Immediately When I Saw How Darth Vader ‘Did’nt’ Move The Same In The Newer/Non Prowse Films… Prowse, James Earl Jones, George Lucas (Plus Kershner And Marquand), John Williams And Alll That Had To Do With With His Costume Design And Sound ‘Are’ Darth Vader
‘Star Wars’ & ‘The Empire Strikes Back’ Are The Reasons I Became A Filmmaker… Story, Story Scope, Characters & Character Development Are My Thing Largely Because Of It… May The Force, And The 4th Be With You
A young half Japanese, have Caucasian, 17 year old girl arrives in an automated Limousine Flyer, outside the high rise apartment building of ‘REAL TECH’ Industries CEO, and Owner, JACK RYAS.
The girl, EUPHORIA, is the head Hacker… Er… Computer Specialist for the company.
She has a slim, but slightly curvy figure, with white shoulder length hair and grey eyes.
Wearing all white, her outfit is skin tight, but with a utility belt, and wrist brace devices… and on her fingernails are little black skulls against a white background.
Outside the entrance are two very large security guards, dressed in all black, with dark shades…
Euphoria is also wearing shades, hers are silver…
…through them she sees all the hidden backup weapons on each of their persons.
“Hello…” she says as she walks by them.
“Euphoria…” one of them replies.
Euphoria crosses the lobby, and enters the high speed elevator…
…but before it starts to go up, she stops it, “Halt”.
“What if it’s bad news… What if…” her thoughts wander off.
“Go,” with this the elevator continues.
It stops at Jack’s bedroom floor, and opens.
She enters the barely lit room hesitantly… She’s never been anywhere near Jack’s Apartment, let alone his bedroom.
“Euphoria… Come,” he speaks weakly…
…as he lays in his bed, several blinking medical devices are around him.
Euphoria moves very slowly, and can tell looking at him, that he is not well…
…tears come to her eyes, but she pushes them back.
“Hello Jack… We’ve missed you at work… I’ve–” she speaks, but is cut off.
“Come…” he says, patting his bed.
Jack looks to be in his late twenties, but whatever’s wrong with him, makes him look a bit older, and definitely thinner.
She slowly makes her way to the edge of his bed, and sits, as far away from him as possible.
He smiles, “I’ve missed you too.”
Euphoria smiles slightly, but than the dread of what he’s probably going to tell her returns, and she is subdued once more.
“Euphoria… What you’ve done for ‘Real Tech’… What you’ve done for me, has been…” he fades off, and coughs.
She stands and approaches him, “Do you need some water?”
His coughing stops, “Don’t worry, I’m not contagious…”
She sits next to him, “I’m not going to be around much longer Euphoria…”
She looks horrified, and can no longer hold back the tears, which begin to run down her face.
He places a hand on her cheek, “I’m leaving you in control of ‘Real Tech’… The things we’re accomplishing there… They’re changing the world.”
She takes his hand, “What is it… What’s wrong with you… We can stop it… We can heal you!!” she bursts out in desperation.
Jack smiles, “It’s no use… This body is done.”
She puts two of her fingers on his forehead, “But this mind is not… With the new Cloning Technology, and Consciousness Transfers, we’ll just get you a new body, I’m sure it will work…”
“Believe it or not, I’m a believer in the nature of things… Though it might seem the contrary with my companies creations…” he explains.
“There’s nothing natural about you leaving this world under 30!” she says spiritedly, and stands…
…when she does, she notices an open computer port with blue colored text across the screen… what one might call an old school way to process, or write.
Jack glances at it.
“I’m a Writer… I never told anyone that…” he explains.
She approaches the computer port, on the screen she sees writing about a fantasy barbarian character, called Khor’an.
“Khor’an,” she speaks.
Jack laughs a bit, then coughs, this time worse.
She rushes to him, and hands him a glass of clear water.
Exhausted, he finally stops coughing, takes the water, and takes a drink.
He sits it down, “Euphoria, tell me you’ll keep ‘Real Tech’ going…”
She stares at him, then nods in agreement.
He smiles, then picks up a small Identifier Tablet, signs it, then hands it to her…
…she looks at him, tears welling again, then signs.
“I better get some rest…” he speaks, smiles, then falls asleep…
Euphoria sits in the low lit room, rain starting to strike the outside window looking over the city…
Jaden lights a cigar, and flips on his computer screen.
“M6, Open client list…” he speaks.
“Client List, Open.
He stands, “Clients… This is the last time you will hear from me… I appreciate all of you contracts, and will attach referrals for future services.
Jaden Darius Tusk… Out”
“Our You Sure You Want To Do This Jaden…”
He turns of his computer screen, “It’s done.”
Jaden puts out the cigar, throws on a black coat, and heads out the door.
OUTSIDE JADEN’S APARTMENT
He summons his craft, then lifts into the sky.
In his craft he brings up the 7 Hybrids on his screen.
“M3, take me to NORTEN BRAYLECK’S home…” he speaks to his vehicle.
“Affirmative.”
His ship flies for a bit, then enters a non desirable district.
DISTRICT 6
He lands his craft across the street from a run down home with 6 carrier crafts parked in front of it.
“This Isn’t A Very Safe Area Jaden…”
“I know…” he replies.
Suddenly, 4 heavily armed street youth in their 20’s approach his vehicle.
His driver’s door opens.
They’re a bit surprised to a very fit silver haired Jaden step out.
“What’s up old timer…” speaks one of them, aiming his canon at him subtly.
Jaden disregards the youth, stepping by them, and towards the house.
A fifth youth steps out from behind one of the black carriers, gun lifted, Jaden disarms him, removes the ammo cartridge from the cannon, and drops it on the street.
The youth follows him into the house, amused by what they’re seeing.
Jaden enters, there are two girl Hackers, and one more young thug surrounding another dark haired youth on a computer.
“I said no interruptions!” speaks the black haired youth on the computer, without turning to face Jaden.
“Norten Braylecks?” speaks Jaden.
The black haired youth turns to face him, he is of Asian decent, his eyes are dark with hacker lights in his eyes, “Who’s asking?”
“Dark Light,” replies Jaden, who seems suddenly shocked by this.
“You really should see a Cyber Specialist Rogue…” speaks a dark haired, 40 something year old female, in a medical coat.
Sitting in a Cyber Adjustment chair is Detective CHESTER ROGUE, a black with silver tips haired, fairly rugged looking, yet somewhat handsome man in his early 50’s.
“Yeah… Well… If I do, they’ll just reignite the arms’ militant aspects… No thanks,” Rogue replies, as he looks down at his Cybernetic right arm, its’ electronics open.
She approaches the arm with an instrument, “Still…” she makes some adjustments, which cause his fingers to move.
She closes it up, “There yah go.”
He bends his arm, which appears to be functioning fine.
“Thanks Doc…”
OUTSIDE IN THE STREET, NEAR THE DOCTOR’S OFFICE
Rogue lights a cigarette, and clicks a switch on his key chain, causing the sleek black vehicle before him’s driver side door to open…
He gets in…
“Up…” the ship rises some 100 feet into the air, then propels forward, entering a metropolis sky full of other types of flying vehicles…
…From product, to people transport, to high end cruisers, to ships similar to his own in general design.
“I should go home… There’s no reason for me to be out here tonight…” he thinks to himself, as his ship swoops through the sky, avoiding all other craft.
It was a dark night…
Even for the Blue Zone District.
Lights in the city seamed as seldom stars…
As Rogue’s ship went low, the BOULEVARD was quiet.
…and it was late.
“Better than being home with my cat…”
Rogue’s eyes swept the streets, as if looking for something… Or… Someone.
“It’s better this way. We both need space. Autonomy.”
Suddenly three girls appear on the street, one looks dressed unbelievably, she has red brown hair to her shoulders, light makeup on her beautiful face… She looks to be like 26ish.
The other two are younger, but not nearly the scale of… Anything the first girl is.
The other two girls look scared, but trying to draw attention from drivers by.
” ROSE SCARLETT,” he says under his breath.
He knows her.
The girls see Rogues vehicle approach, and Rose waves the other two girls off, “I got this.”
Rogue pulls up along side the curve, and lowers his dark passenger window.
She leans over to peer in his dark cockpit, “Hi Rogue…”
He puts his cigarette out, raises the window, and drives away.
TOODLOCK THIRE
“You couldn’t always control your Telepathy right? This is no different Jenna…” Nisho pleas.
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